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  • Great

    I know this is an essay site, but this story is too great to be kept a secret.
    • 28/02/2004
    • 01:53:12
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Sex offenders

    This doesn't really answer the topic question. Sure you made some great cases and provided good examples, but it isn't wholly relevant to the essay question.
    • 28/02/2004
    • 00:44:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Gary Paulsen

    Some of the information is a bit redundant and there really is no need to repeat information (you mentioned his birthdate 3 times!) By placing the Top 10 survival tips right in the middle of the essay, it breaks the flow and continuity of the essay; it would've been smarter to place that information in an appendix. Having said that, this is informational and is above average, especially considering this is 9th grade level.
    • 28/02/2004
    • 00:00:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Debt

    Using Tammy and Vanette as an example is "iffy". If I were to rewrite the second and third paragraph to an objective one. The last sentence of the final paragraph should\'ve been in a paragraph of its own, which would have made it into your conclusion. Overall, this was well researched
    • 27/02/2004
    • 22:20:37
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Coral Sea

    This is probably one of the best essays I've read on the events that unfurled at Coral Sea. Judging from the number of words (997), I'm assuming that it was 1000 word limit, thus you couldn't fit in ALL the events that took place. However, this is a very thorough and well structured essay and I recommend people who are doing an essay on this subject to use this as a guide.
    • 27/02/2004
    • 21:57:14
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Hitler

    This essay shows how passionate Hitler was to make Germany a better place to live in, even though one of his main motives was to eradicate the Jewish population.One thing that's wrong with this essay is the final sentence; it just doesn't give it a powerful ending - the author could've easily replaced the word 'good', and the ending would most probably have been acceptable.
    • 27/02/2004
    • 21:10:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Schooling

    I love it how it refers to quotes repeatedly throughout the whole essay which is a surefire way to get maximum points for your essay, as long as your quotes relate to the topic sentence. The conclusion is concise and all in all this essay is just amazing.
    • 27/02/2004
    • 20:56:57
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Same sex marriage

    One important rule of essay writing is to not use personal pronouns, and this essay starts of with just that. It has some few points that are worth taking note of, BUT those points are repeated incessantly.Finally, the final quote given seems out of place. The quote should back up your argument - this quote just seems pointless and out of place.
    • 27/02/2004
    • 20:42:06
    • Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Great!

    This essay is great! Great well thought out arguments which were backed up with statistics which made it even stronger
    • 27/02/2004
    • 05:16:06
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.