You told almost everything about the role of women in Victorian England. Keep on!
- 03/03/2004
- 01:18:53
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In your last sentence you have found the essence of your essay. You should think about a second part in which you explain the rearing of the children of the labourers in a deeper light.
- 28/02/2004
- 10:24:20
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You have explained the medieval warfare in a good mode. I think your quotations show your skill of writing good essays. You also have comment on the books you used. I can see that you have think a lot about this topic.
- 27/02/2004
- 07:25:55
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This topic is an important one. Also some cartoons have seen this problem, e.g. The Simpsons. There you can see that violence can make children more violent against their own family. So violent films shouldn't be seen by children!
- 27/02/2004
- 07:23:11
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It's a superb essay. Well done! I couldn't stop reading it. So keep on!
- 27/02/2004
- 07:03:05
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I'm studying history in Edinburgh. This essay (after a translation) told me much about the city of Alexandria. Well, you should told us more about the role of Alexander during the foundation but it was interesting to read. Thanks.
- 27/02/2004
- 04:12:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.