Your essay, although good in length needs "something." You have a few spelling errors, and for that i would recommend a dictionary, your grammatical structure is good. You left out some important details about cloning, some extra research could make this an even better essay. But other than that, good job. Please do not take this comment as being too harsh, I am just trying to give you some hints.
- 24/04/2004
- 21:23:13
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I have read this book and you wrote an essay in small but big detail, if you know what i mean. Just like you i would choose feelings and memories. Good job
- 03/03/2004
- 17:52:56
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I am currently in an english class with a group of students reading the stone angel. They have found the novel to be somewhat boring so far. I will have to tell them about your essay and what you said about the book. Maybe the book will be more interesting to them in future readings. good job on making a "boring" book sound good.
- 02/03/2004
- 18:07:52
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is a very good and well written paper. I can tell that you have put in a lot of research, and that is what makes it a good paper. Good job!
- 02/03/2004
- 17:52:53
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I found your essay rather boring, sorry. I felt that you repeated yourself a lot and therefore did not have a lot of information. i am a 10th grade highschool student and i wear uniforms. I agree with children not wearing uniforms, as they grow and would need new ones every year. I suggest that next time you find more information before you write another essay.
- 01/03/2004
- 13:09:57
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Congradulations on your essay. It was a real eye opener. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your piece. I use a cell phone and what you explained is all true. I think that this is a very well researched essay. Good job!
- 01/03/2004
- 12:59:57
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.