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Sidewalk: The Street Vendors of 6th Avenue - A look at the Economic Sytems, Kinship, and Social Controls by which they live.
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Good paper just a few corrections are needed
There is an over use of "and" in connection with run on sentances. The paper would flow much better if the sentances were grammatically correct. Otherwise good job!- 13/04/2004
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