You should fix up the <Tab/> stuff.
- 03/05/2004
- 20:53:24
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"Because from high school to university the courses become hard suddenly compared to the easy ones in the high schools. "Don't start sentences with because unless you know the proper way to do it. This sentence has no subject, it is a fragment. Revise it please. I am hoping you know what is wrong. Sorry, I'm just picky about obvious grammar mistakes.
- 14/03/2004
- 00:03:44
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like the fact that this essay is short as if it were too long it might have been boring. It's amazing that google has gotten that popular in such a short time.
- 09/03/2004
- 19:25:15
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This is a great essay and I agree with your opinion. It's sad though that college isn't even the only place where binge drinking is a problem.
- 09/03/2004
- 19:21:51
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I'm not a fan of essays beginning with "In this essay I will..." and the like. Essays based on literary novels just sound better also if you do not use the terms I and the like. It kind of gives the idea that you're not really... sure on what you're writing. Or at least that's the idea I get. But maybe that's just the fact that my lit teacher drilled that in my head.
- 08/03/2004
- 20:21:57
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This was a good summary. It was short, like a summary, I feel, is better as, and it was to the point. Good job.Although, I must admit, that I did not enjoy this book personally. >.<
- 08/03/2004
- 20:16:36
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This is really great. I love the description you put in here. I also feel that this has much meaning that lies beneath the surface. Great job.
- 08/03/2004
- 20:09:44
- Score: 15 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
There were a few grammar mistakes. Should oxygen have been capital all the time? I'm not sure, but other than that you switched a few times to lowercase and then back to capitals. I also felt that you said oxygen too much. I know this essay was about oxygen, but I felt that the amount of times you actually said oxygen gave it a rather monotonous feeling. Other than that, it was pretty good.
- 07/03/2004
- 01:57:44
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PARAGRAPHS! That's all I have to say. This is so hard to read without paragraphs it's crazy. I hope you didn't hand this in in this format.
- 07/03/2004
- 01:46:25
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I think this can use some more detail. Your sentence structure also seems kind of repetitive. Next time maybe you can try using more variety in your sentence structure?
- 05/03/2004
- 21:58:34
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As was already mentioned, use capital letters. Also, use a grammar and spell check since I noticed a few mistakes.
- 05/03/2004
- 21:55:50
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I thought this was pretty informative. Good job.
- 05/03/2004
- 21:50:17
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
The main criticism I can give to this essay is that it would have been better if you had not used I or we. My lit teacher told us a rule about how when you do such essays like this, you should not use words like that. Also, a piece of advice. NEVER, NEVER, NEVER say \"In this essay I will...\"! You will sound much more professional and intelligent if you use some other type of wording for saying that. Other than that, this was a good essay.
- 05/03/2004
- 19:30:50
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.