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  • Good case study.

    Read it, it's a Good Case Study.
    • 14/10/2005
    • 21:23:58
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Short and sweet

    I actually liked it... and the twist at the end when the follower was shot by the boss... that was cool! You've done a good job and I can't wait to read some of your other essays.
    • 25/08/2005
    • 07:04:07
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done!

    You've done an awesome job writing this poem! It was an intense and creative poem that basically left me speechless. Well Done!
    • 25/08/2005
    • 06:56:32
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • The Perfect Career

    I am glad that you have found something that you're passionate about. Although your interest in this career is clearly displayed throughout this essay, I think that it still needs a lot more work.
    • 17/08/2005
    • 16:46:35
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • My House

    This is a very descriptive essay and it clearly describes your dream house, but it lacks passion. You want to make the readers feel as though this is the house they want but they can't have.
    • 17/08/2005
    • 16:39:42
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Our Journey to Earth

    This is a good topic for a creative story, but the essay itself lacked excitement.
    • 17/08/2005
    • 16:34:09
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Money Does Talk

    This is an interesting topic to approach, but the essay itself wasn't as strong. I was unsure of which angle you were approaching from. But keep up the good work!
    • 17/08/2005
    • 16:20:15
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Hilarious!

    This is one amusing essay, and I compliment you on your choice of topic.
    • 17/08/2005
    • 16:11:18
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Married or Single?

    This is an interesting topic but I think you need a bit more work. You have discussed the pros for being single but what about the cons?
    • 17/08/2005
    • 07:28:46
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Loved it!!

    i felt the pain that christine experienced because the descriptions are so explicate.
    • 10/03/2004
    • 05:33:45
    • Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Thrilling!!!

    i enjoyed every bit!.. although a bit disappointed that it ended so abruptly.
    • 09/03/2004
    • 04:12:59
    • Score: 20 out of 36 people found this comment useful.