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  • Good, but a few suggestions...

    there are a lot of good points in this essay but it could be a lot stronger if it didnt have so many \"to be\" verbs and passive voice. it would also be a lot stronger if written in third person (ie: no us, we)
    • 08/03/2004
    • 20:55:57
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