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  • Have to agree...

    I can't imagine that you got a 95% on this. The grammatical errors alone should have kept the score lower than a 95%.
    • 03/06/2004
    • 15:20:44
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Porphyria's Lover

    I'm not a huge fan of poetry but I really enjoyed this read. You did a good job of keeping the reader interested. Once again, great job!
    • 02/06/2004
    • 12:51:09
    • Score: 33 out of 44 people found this comment useful.
  • Do not go......

    Awesome! You did a wonderful job with this essay. Very well written.
    • 02/06/2004
    • 12:49:10
    • Score: 37 out of 43 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good!

    Enjoyed reading it very much! Great job!
    • 02/06/2004
    • 12:47:49
    • Score: 49 out of 58 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Job!

    Nice work! I felt that the answeres to the questions were very thourough.Keep up the good work!
    • 02/06/2004
    • 09:31:56
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Well written

    But you need to sire your sources. This will help to add credibility to your essay.
    • 25/05/2004
    • 12:01:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Effective Leadership

    Well written. As johnjjp pointed out, you need a bibliography. I practice using self-directed teams with my employees.Good job!
    • 04/05/2004
    • 10:38:36
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Agreed

    I would have to agree with johnjjp and dehawk666 that eith the formatting is off or your paragraph is too long. Good content though!
    • 22/04/2004
    • 14:46:00
    • Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job!

    I found the story very suspenseful and well written. Very imaginative!Thanks!!
    • 22/04/2004
    • 10:29:11
    • Score: 25 out of 33 people found this comment useful.
  • Held my interest...

    Good job! The essay kept my interest throughout. I also agree with reneway in that it was very moving.Thank you!
    • 22/04/2004
    • 10:25:52
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Good.

    Very good essay. Well written. Congratulations.
    • 08/04/2004
    • 07:25:04
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Agreed

    I agree with the other comments. No point, poorly written, too short. Perhaps you should read some of the other creative writing essays found here to get an idea of what should be included.
    • 31/03/2004
    • 08:30:30
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • State your purpose

    Good essay but it would be better if you stated your purpose in the beginning of the essay.
    • 30/03/2004
    • 08:05:24
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good!

    I thought this was a very good essay. I liked your comparison of Enron to pyramid schemes and to a market bubble. Congratulations!
    • 29/03/2004
    • 11:40:07
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Sources?

    I found the essay informative but Sources need to be cited to add credability.
    • 25/03/2004
    • 08:02:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • It made me smile!

    I enjoyed reading this essay. It brought a smile to my face.
    • 23/03/2004
    • 07:36:08
    • Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent!

    Congrats! Very nice work!
    • 22/03/2004
    • 16:24:51
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Sources?

    I thought the essay was informative and interesting but as bhramara pointed out, more validation should be used. This validation could be in the form of experiment descriptions and sources cited.
    • 19/03/2004
    • 08:47:06
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very nice!

    I thought this essay was well written. Good command of the English language.Congratulations!
    • 18/03/2004
    • 07:41:33
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Work.

    There are a few spelling and grammatical errors but overall a good essay.Examples: easyJet in the 1st paragraph needs to be capitalized."bas" in the first paragraph should be "as""organisation" in the third paragraph should be spelled ozganization.
    • 17/03/2004
    • 10:43:49
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Job!

    I found this essay to be very informative. I would like to see a follow-up paper on how the project went in the field and what the results were.
    • 16/03/2004
    • 11:03:39
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.