One suggestion: use paragraphs
- 18/03/2004
- 10:50:26
- Score: 8 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
well i read somewhere that instead of commenting on everything I could just use a controlling idea (order and disorder here) and write the whole of the essay under the light of the controlling idea described in the opening paragraph. This makes work easier and the essay becomes more coherent, flowing and organised. But, is it really a good idea?
- 18/03/2004
- 10:18:27
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I guess you have generalized the schools in these countries unfairly. You need to do a lot of research before you make such comparisons about difficulty of subject matter, condition of studying and so on. The essay's fairly good, nevertheless.
- 13/03/2004
- 15:31:24
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Very convincing and well written. The example of your daughter effectively helped strengthen the argument.
- 11/03/2004
- 12:15:02
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
When it comes to imagery in Macbeth there's a lot we can talk about. The imageries mentioned here aren't elaborate enough.
- 10/03/2004
- 11:08:44
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.