This essay is a piece of propaganda. Hitler would be proud.
- 15/03/2004
- 02:59:24
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay over generalizes the issue that is written about. I kept waiting for the next sentence to be, "All black people like fried chicken and watermelon." or, "All white people can't dance." Life is MUCH more complex than the author would have you believe.
- 15/03/2004
- 02:44:53
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is an EXCELLENT essay for the 9th grade level. VERY well done. There are some formatting issues that need to be fixed with spaces in the middle of words.
- 15/03/2004
- 02:28:30
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A very well written essay. It bogged down at times though and would be better if it was more streamlined.
- 15/03/2004
- 02:17:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This good essay would be better if it was rewritten as 2 or 3 paragraphs with some excerpts of some of his writings added.
- 15/03/2004
- 02:04:25
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
MANY of the sentences are WAY too LONG and combine WAY too much information. The period is a beautiful thing...learn to use it!!! This essay would be good if it was rewritten without so many run-on sentences.
- 15/03/2004
- 01:58:05
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Below is a link to a web page which lists various links to more information about the Challenger accident.http://www.hq.nasa.gov/office/pao/History/sts51l.html
- 15/03/2004
- 01:40:55
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.