Beautifuly writen and personalized. but try to portray a little more personally how huge an impact he has made, list off organizations that have come to be thanks to his technology and later discoveries inspired by his work and so forth maybe
- 17/03/2004
- 21:08:57
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If it is important to you, i would suggest adding a little more personal flair and individuality to the essay. It sounds very textbook-ish
- 17/03/2004
- 21:01:13
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You should try to explore and recognize the many textual symbolisms and metaphores of the peice as well perhaps. Very informative though
- 16/03/2004
- 22:49:42
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