Sorry, that's terrible, even as an inclass essay. You retold events, didn't analyze them at all, or provide alternative options.Thesis? Points? If I want a lecture, I'll ask a parent.
- 01/06/2004
- 04:08:16
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Add page numbers as references;If you're doing a plot summary, be more in depth (increase 200+ words). If you're trying to prove a point, make it really obvious (have a thesis statement)
- 02/04/2004
- 09:27:13
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No Intro + No Conclusion + No Thesis statement = No essay
- 27/03/2004
- 20:07:04
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Too short to be an essay. Good ideas, expand to about 500 as an absolute minimum
- 19/03/2004
- 18:56:50
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Good essay, interesting take
- 19/03/2004
- 18:52:44
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great research - not in essay format...
- 19/03/2004
- 00:11:51
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.