I strongly disagree! This is an act that broke down the wall between the CIA and FBI. It's a law that will save many lives in my opinion. This is atrocious, your liberal views made your paper bias. If you like this essay i dont know what to say... Pathetic! Bush is a great president and one that will avenge us for the 9/11 act...for that I really respect him.
- 24/04/2004
- 00:57:23
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I was impressed by your introduction...maybe if you were giving a speech. there could have been a better way to get the message across. Many of your facts are wrong! Did you ever research it? The atomic bombs in japan killed roughly 200 thousand not millions! nOt a good essay
- 04/04/2004
- 18:04:20
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I liked your paper, but ebonics is a joke. People need to learn correct english. All people have the capacities to learn. It seems to me that some people are just lazy and want to sound cool by saying dat dis...and all these ebonics. good information on the subject
- 04/04/2004
- 15:30:06
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I have read all your essays now. They all seem to lack an organization. I suggest you write down all your ideas in outline form then put your essay together. Plus open up dictionary.com and if your not sure on a word type it in there and get the correct spelling. You have good thoughts just need to organize it so we understand more. Try some of these tips and write something I would like to read it.
- 03/04/2004
- 02:30:40
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Very good paper, most research papers are boring, but this was a fun read! In florida there was cases of west nile near my home. Very informative, must of got a good grade.
- 03/04/2004
- 02:24:16
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Yeah, i noticed that also...the end is technical and you can tell you did'nt write it. Im strongly aganist gay marriage, this paper certainly did'nt change my point of view. It was decent...you need to show your point of view more clearly
- 03/04/2004
- 02:18:25
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You say climb the ladder like 15 times maybe try and find another way to say it. Other than that it was very informative. By the end i was wondering if you were in a gang yourself. Overall Good Job!
- 31/03/2004
- 23:57:10
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Well, i see many problems in your paper. The first most obvious is the fact that you repeat your self so much!! For Example in the fourth paragraph from the bottom you say "In The Hotel New Hampshire, the prostitutes are a big part of life in the Hotel New Hampshire" just say "In the Hotel New Hampshire prostitution is a big part of life." Watch your grammar alittle bit and you'll be ok
- 31/03/2004
- 23:44:24
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Its well written but i think the sentences could flow alittle better. I dont know if it was just how you copied it on here but your paragraphs are messed up. The large paragraph starting "over the years" should be split up somewhere, i think. i agree with you its more important to save the live of humans. Animal research is a good thing. Plus for all you animal lovers...more rodants die from pet snakes every year that in research. Overall good job!
- 31/03/2004
- 23:30:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Its ok, but you need to elaborate on this. There is spelling, rushing, grammar mistakes everywhere. You really need to proof read your work when your done!
- 31/03/2004
- 01:37:06
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Decent job...You obviously read the book. Or maybe you watched the movie like i did haha
- 31/03/2004
- 01:33:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This paper is very true, im a duel enrollment student so i know. Good work i totally agree, i like college alot more!
- 31/03/2004
- 01:10:29
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a moving paper that made me feel what you go through! Excellent job!
- 28/03/2004
- 23:49:25
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Its a good essay! But, i feel differently i have hispanic friends we all get along great and im white. Where i live i dont see much racial discrimination. It might be different as the location varies i dont know.
- 28/03/2004
- 23:39:50
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Wow, you spent alot of time on this! Good job it was an interesting read. Even though kinda boring but all in all it was good!
- 28/03/2004
- 23:12:57
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Nice job, very descriptive and informative. Great facts, spent some time on this one.
- 27/03/2004
- 22:33:54
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Well, for an 8th grader it's good. There are small things out of whack like comma splice, run on etc. Noticed acouple of miss spelling. But overall its a decent paper.
- 27/03/2004
- 12:07:08
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
decent, could elaborate more. Sentences don't flow easily. But, it is a good start. Im not a english guru but i think there is some bad grammar in there.
- 27/03/2004
- 12:00:48
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
reported both sides of the arguement and came to a good feasible conclusion.
- 27/03/2004
- 11:55:31
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.