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  • Good effort

    Straightforward way of putting it although I'd like to use pictures to illustrate fractions better. =)
    • 08/04/2004
    • 14:13:56
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting read

    Whether it's true or not I'd rather not speculate but you probably could write in the next book about Mcdonalisation.
    • 08/04/2004
    • 14:12:54
    • Score: 20 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
  • Crux of the problem not discussed

    Too general, underlying causes of terrorism isn't discusses. Ie, ideological and sociological level.
    • 08/04/2004
    • 14:11:17
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting piece

    Pretty interesting but I don't really like the idea of quantifying religion.
    • 08/04/2004
    • 14:09:44
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Comprehensive write up!

    Good job there! Keep it up! Well researched!
    • 08/04/2004
    • 14:08:44
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice article on Rousseau

    I studied rousseau last sem and you helped build up my impression of him even more. Good job
    • 23/03/2004
    • 04:39:41
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good comparison

    Can be better if better expanded upon. Good work
    • 23/03/2004
    • 04:36:35
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting read

    Kept me interested throughout the read. Nice work
    • 23/03/2004
    • 04:34:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • I got lost

    somewhere in the sound section. A whole chunk of info but poorly structured.
    • 20/03/2004
    • 10:45:49
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Too short, too brief

    Not elaborated enough. This guy is submitting for the sake of submitting and scoring points. Write a real essay!
    • 20/03/2004
    • 10:44:37
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Great work!

    Excellent case studies. I think you've hit the nail on the head on this topic. Good Job
    • 20/03/2004
    • 10:42:53
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good linkages and historical background

    Good substantiation from historical sources. Maybe more recent case studies could help reinforce your point?
    • 20/03/2004
    • 10:41:11
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting stuff

    Thought provoking and informative. A bit too short though, could be further expanded upon
    • 20/03/2004
    • 10:38:08
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Poor vocab, too informal

    Good ideas but poorly expressed. Writing style is also too informal to be convincing. Needs brushing up on vocab and grammar. Decent effort though
    • 20/03/2004
    • 10:36:02
    • Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Pretty decent

    Not too shabby, a bit too short to have a strong impact though. Could quote sources.
    • 20/03/2004
    • 10:34:22
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Some tips

    You cannot talk about global warming without first talking about ozone depletion.
    • 18/03/2004
    • 20:31:32
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • This is one heck of a comprehensive essay!

    Really good work here! It's been very educational!
    • 18/03/2004
    • 20:16:22
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Fresh Perspective and good information!

    I just wrote one essay about the justification of the US war with respect to the hidden policies the US had in terms of oil, reelections and currency control and I must say that this essay does appear to swing me back towards anti-saddam. Good work!
    • 18/03/2004
    • 19:23:02
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very refreshing!

    A good take on a difficult topic to explain. You make literature majors proud!
    • 18/03/2004
    • 13:54:07
    • Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Detailed and conscise

    Good work! Straight to the point without beating roung the bush!
    • 18/03/2004
    • 13:25:53
    • Score: 8 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Signs in Singapore

    In Singapore, where there's a traffic accident, we get a sign with a car on its side flashed on the electronic display and it looks like a dead tamagotchi!
    • 18/03/2004
    • 13:18:07
    • Score: 19 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
  • Good take on a broad topic

    It's good to see you've covered areas such as Gene Therapy as well as stem cell research. Perhaps your answer would have been more relavent if the question was more focused. One thing about science though, it holds true until proven false by another theory.. remember once people though the earth was flat? =)
    • 18/03/2004
    • 13:07:57
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • How about present circumstances?

    Apart from being textbookish, how come nothing was mentioned about relations at present (esp about UK support of US in the Iraq war)?
    • 18/03/2004
    • 13:01:51
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • It's a good start

    Good basic concepts on financial management. Can be easily expanded and developed upon.
    • 18/03/2004
    • 12:49:52
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good start

    A good reference for key terms. Could be better expanded upon.
    • 18/03/2004
    • 12:43:43
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A little lacking...

    Perhaps your essay would have been better if it had focused more on the driving force of terrorism... the ideology and education of such madmen.
    • 18/03/2004
    • 12:39:38
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting piece, good try

    I applaud your effort but perhaps there can be more focus in your writing? You touch briefly on the aspects you want to express but they are not developed enough because they are too vague
    • 18/03/2004
    • 12:35:02
    • Score: 23 out of 27 people found this comment useful.
  • Full of passion, feeling

    I could feel the depth coming from her words. Very moving yet slightly disturbing. Keep up the good work!
    • 18/03/2004
    • 12:32:29
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Comprehensive

    Very helpful and comprehensive! Could have better references to resources used though. Keep up the good work!
    • 18/03/2004
    • 11:27:14
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A quick bite of information

    Although highly condensed, I feel it touches on the major aspects of Globalisation. If expanded upon it would be very informative.
    • 18/03/2004
    • 11:23:45
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.