This essay is a good read. I am not sure what the point of the essay is though. I am more familiar with essays in a formal structure. What exactly is your thesis?
- 15/04/2004
- 09:03:37
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Essay is informative. simple capitalization and spelling problems are present. overall good essay.
- 25/03/2004
- 05:04:07
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I stopped reading this article after the first paragraph. You talk about the upcoming movie and what could happen. This means you have no idea what the movie is actually about and have no basis for your argument. Wait to criticise something after you have taken the time to see it.
- 19/03/2004
- 18:28:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay was very well written. Overall personal opinion was left out as well. Religion is not the sole basis for the argument; research and general quality of life is. I am impressed at the structure, research, and maturity used to write this paper.
- 19/03/2004
- 18:17:04
- Score: 11 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
(I know you've been here a while. I just wanted to be silly.) Taking into consideration that English is not your native tongue, I feel that this essay is a good try. It is cute and personable. You are in your second year of college, and are still making a few simple grammar mistakes. That is understandable though. Next time, ask a peer to proof read your work before handing it in.
- 18/03/2004
- 13:43:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a good attempt at a love letter written by Gatsby. Then tone and flow seem believable.
- 18/03/2004
- 08:22:20
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This paper was well thought out, researched, and written. Multiple view points are explored. It is not biased or one sided. I look forward to reading more by this user. Good job.
- 18/03/2004
- 08:17:02
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.