omg it must have taken you three years to write that essay. i love how you have a table of contents and the body of your essay is so well organized. you even have excellent works cited. very very good job.
- 01/05/2002
- 09:47:14
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
you're information is ok but you have a lot of run on sentences and grammar errors. if you fix your grammar your essay would be fine.
- 19/04/2002
- 10:28:59
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You need some grammar corrections. Otherwise, you're essay was great. It was probably better than i could've written anyway.
- 18/04/2002
- 10:38:13
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I like the way that you expressed the base of Michaelangelo's art through his feelings. You obviously put a lot of thought into this paper.
- 18/04/2002
- 10:35:47
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
you did good background research and you should get credit for having all the facts in your essay. although, some of your grammar was off. fix that and you would have an 'A' essay. good job.
- 18/04/2002
- 00:15:05
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.