User Details For: Galgorth
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The title is simply "Artificial Intelligence." It is about Artificial Intelligence and the basic aspects of it, but does not go into great mathematical detail.
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The title is "Civil War Battles Summary." It is a summary of 5 major Civil War battles. I also included a bibliography.
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The title is "The Declaration of Independence." It is about the signing of the declaration from the perspective of a person living in July 5, 1776, the day after it was signed.
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Improvements to make
There are many grammatical errors. Fix these. Stop using the verb "to be" so often, it weakens your argument. Give support and examples about why your parents are great americans; perhaps a story about something patriotic one of them did. Also, think about revising the conclusion, as it's not very clear right now.- 19/04/2002
- 23:34:34
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Please use proper grammar
This essay has very poor grammar, and its good points were were soured by the use of poorly chosen words. The use of the first person in the thesis statement also weakened the essay considerably.- 19/04/2002
- 23:28:09
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.