Ignoring the spelling and grammtical errors, this is a pretty good essay on the Beatles. The problem is, it is supposed to be on John Lennon. The essay barely touches on Lennon's private life after the Beatles or his political contributions. I think it is poorly researched and put together. Seems like there are a bunch of point form notes stuck together to form one whole body of work which simply does not flow or fit. If you're going to dedicate your topic on one person, make sure you stick to that topic.
- 20/05/2004
- 13:36:15
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