User Details For: bettyscruffytwo

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  • Cell Phones & Driving

    I liked the intro, the body, and the solution.
    • 24/04/2004
    • 20:41:52
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Things Fall Apart

    I found this interesting enough to read all the way through. I went back a couple of times to try to find out who lkemefuna was. I did not find out,this might be a problem with transition. I have to really work on transitions also. All in all I thought it interesting. Thank You.
    • 27/03/2004
    • 19:43:33
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Your essay is why I paid to come into this site.

    I find that you do have some valid points about smokers. I suggest that if you cannot remember being a nonsmoker that you interview a few. I was expecting more body.However you have given me some ideas for the piece that I am working on. Keep on coming on.
    • 27/03/2004
    • 19:19:44
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.