I liked the intro, the body, and the solution.
- 24/04/2004
- 20:41:52
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I found this interesting enough to read all the way through. I went back a couple of times to try to find out who lkemefuna was. I did not find out,this might be a problem with transition. I have to really work on transitions also. All in all I thought it interesting. Thank You.
- 27/03/2004
- 19:43:33
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I find that you do have some valid points about smokers. I suggest that if you cannot remember being a nonsmoker that you interview a few. I was expecting more body.However you have given me some ideas for the piece that I am working on. Keep on coming on.
- 27/03/2004
- 19:19:44
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.