I think it was well written.
- 07/04/2004
- 02:42:40
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is a creative writing essay, therefore he can write watever he wants to. There is no rules saying u cant write wat u want to. And if it wasnt any good it wouldnt have been excepted. so back off.
- 05/04/2004
- 07:21:45
- Score: 6 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
i think it was great. It showed real feeling and i like that. Keep up the good work :)
- 03/04/2004
- 22:14:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
right well first of all id like to thankyou for your criticism, but i only write things how i feel. I dont try and make dem great and wonderful. I write my thoughts down how i think of them. Use may not completely understand wat i write,but i do. I like wat i write because its real and i can totally express my self through writing it. Again thankyou for your comments.
- 03/04/2004
- 21:49:42
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.