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  • X

    No way that's a college level A paper.
    • 11/09/2005
    • 21:11:11
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Holy Cow

    This essay shows painful, terrible misunderstanding of the book. Roark's goal is never to be accepted in any way by anyone, because he accepts himself, and that is all that matters to him. The book is about the individual against the collective, Roark being the individual, and he doesn't refuse to build in copied styles because of his 'morals'.. when he is talking to the Bank board, they tell him to stop being so 'selfless, standing up for ones morals'. He tells them that what he is doing is the most selfish act they have ever seen.
    • 13/02/2005
    • 07:17:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Repititive, Incoherent, and Just Plain Wrong

    This essay is a piece of utter crap.First off, it is plain that you never read 'A Clockwork Orange'. The book, nor the movie, promote violence. In fact, the book isn't even //about// violence, but about much more, which you would know if you bothered to read it and analyze the underlying themes.Second of all, you repeat yourself over and over again. Its totally redundant.Thirdly, you don't even seem to take a side, arguing that the film should be banned, which is totally asinine in and of itself, and then go on to state that society has the ability to chose for itself and should not be manipulated by movies.Overall, this essay was a horrid, ill-researched, and redundant piece of work. Go try reading the book before saying what it is and isn't encouraging. -.-
    • 17/10/2004
    • 08:10:23
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well

    Although I do not agree with your argument, this essay is very clealy written and persuasive. Full marks.
    • 03/06/2004
    • 17:21:42
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Very helpful

    This essay is very informative and very well written. Great job!
    • 02/06/2004
    • 14:57:44
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hmm

    I thought it was ver good, even though I don't agree with your stance on abortion. Great idea on making it from the fetus's point of view.
    • 02/06/2004
    • 14:56:25
    • Score: 17 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    Very well written, and highly informative. Great job!
    • 29/05/2004
    • 12:55:15
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Very well done

    Some grammatical errors, byt very nicely written.
    • 29/05/2004
    • 12:53:51
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Job

    I loved the essay, but a word 2 the wise-- unless instructed, never start an essay with a quote.
    • 09/05/2004
    • 21:47:21
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • But

    But, if the earth is so young, how did evolution take place? You can\'t go from organic soup to human being in a short 50,000 years. Evolution is a SLOW process.
    • 09/05/2004
    • 21:45:10
    • Score: 13 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
  • My thoughts

    I felt that this essay was very, well, bland. It was a basic summary of the buook, but it did not delve into the despair that was suffered at the hands of Jurgis, the horrific conditions of the Chicago meatpacking industries, and didn't really go into how he suffered and his tribulations, which is really a focal point of the story. Dissapointing for a book report.
    • 23/04/2004
    • 16:56:22
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • K

    It will help someone who has to write an essay on whether or not Crooks is a survior, or do a charchter analysis. I had to write this essay for school, and this woulld have helped me.
    • 02/04/2004
    • 15:27:11
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    Thank you!!
    • 01/04/2004
    • 16:27:30
    • Score: 4 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • 'Everchanging Face"

    I find that part to be somewhat unfair, seeing as in your essay you did not mention his skin condtiton of vitiligo, and it cannot be proved that he has had more than the 3 surgeries he admits to.
    • 01/04/2004
    • 16:01:32
    • Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • S

    C'mon..it is 5th grade.
    • 31/03/2004
    • 22:01:53
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Why

    You leave out spindle fiber formation, the differences between plant and animal division, and crossing over.
    • 31/03/2004
    • 21:58:21
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Teaching

    I agree with you, but at the same time, there is a big emphais on standardized testing. In order to get into college, they look at your SAT score. I would rather learn what's going to help me, and ultimatly help me into college.Yes, it's wrong, but something has to be done with standardized testing, not teaching.
    • 31/03/2004
    • 19:59:34
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.