User Details For: stan_the_man
Essay List
Professional Football Player
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Finding Motivation For Ministry In the Words of the Apostle Paul
- 1539 words (6 pages)
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The Fact of God
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Great information
I especially like how you started off defining Ai. I also liked how you stated the basic goal. Great job keeping your opinion out of the essay and focusing on the facts.- 06/04/2004
- 19:49:51
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Excellent
Very interesting information, which is backed up with plenty of evidence. One suggestion I have is to vary the words you use to start sentences. Many of your sentences start with the same words.- 04/04/2004
- 23:02:24
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.