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  • Griffin not Griffith

    Decent essay, some gramatical errors, and its John Howard Griffin, not Griffith. Also "the Deep South" should not be capitalized because it is not a proper noun.
    • 20/05/2004
    • 14:03:21
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Couple of examples

    perhaps you could have touched on 1)The Indian Removal and 2) The Red Scare - both of which shows American neglagence towards ideas and races - something i was never told about until 11th grade (yet i learned about columbus every year for 12 years ugh)
    • 19/05/2004
    • 21:39:07
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Very well done

    very well written - you convey the points with such articulate language and fluency. Kind of ironic that this essay ends up on a website called cheathouse.com tho... :)
    • 19/05/2004
    • 21:20:41
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    that is very interesting to hear, its good to see that doctors are out there trying to find a cure to a disease that we know little about.
    • 19/05/2004
    • 20:54:17
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.