User Details For: Shakes

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  • Good story, bad formatting

    U need to watch the punctuation, grammer, and the capitol letters. the content was nice but the overall correctness wasn't. Also, U kept changeing tenses from 3rd person to 1st person. teachers don't like that :P
    • 12/05/2002
    • 22:13:05
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Was good

    that was a good, well written essay and it helped me to understand the book alot. U ight wanna watch it on those theisis' though cause they started to get a bit crazy.
    • 29/04/2002
    • 18:06:52
    • Score: 30 out of 30 people found this comment useful.