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I think that there is quite a bit that could be done/changed to improve this essay. There are many fragments and grammar issues. This is true especially in the last couple of paragraphs. I actually rated it (little yellow smiley). I think that there are a lot of good things in this essay.- 25/04/2002
- 17:02:15
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Same Sex Marriage
I think this is a good essay. There are a few run-on sentences and grammar problems, but other than that it is good. I think that homosexuals should be allowed to express how they feel, even if that means same sex marriage. However, I don't think that it is completly moral.- 25/04/2002
- 16:56:24
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.