Its original....i dont know how usefull this will be but its nicly set out.
- 11/09/2005
- 14:59:46
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Nice and informative but one sided, try to put more information on the victims side and also some information on why corperal punishment shouldn't be used. Then conclude with your opion and why
- 12/02/2005
- 13:40:16
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I agree with brain, what is the point of copying someone elses essay and trying to take credit?
- 12/02/2005
- 13:28:11
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I found this easy to read, you included facts, and used good launguage.Very insperational but i doubt its uses
- 12/02/2005
- 13:18:21
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Its nicly structured, i also learnt alot from it, but then again i dont know much about religion. But back to the point, i gave u top marks
- 12/02/2005
- 13:13:09
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
If u didn't see all of it isn't so wise to write a review of it....if u r gonna submit pieces of work in future make sure that u have all the information.
- 10/09/2004
- 09:28:23
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
More detail on the intro and in the paragraphs, try to link the parts together more...but not bad
- 08/09/2004
- 06:51:08
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This seems a very good essay, lot of hard work put into it. I would certainly use it
- 08/09/2004
- 06:45:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I dont actualy understand what this one is about. And i dont realy understand why its been rated so low? It needs alot of work still.
- 29/07/2004
- 09:01:42
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
wot is with the "<Tab/>"apart from that its fairly good
- 01/07/2004
- 06:20:06
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You could have used more information in the second paragraph, and could have improved the grammer. Not that bad
- 01/07/2004
- 06:18:32
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I dont know why people are rating this low,this actualy a good piece of work, It could use examples and a little more researchbut it is pretty good
- 22/04/2004
- 09:46:37
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Actualy, this is usefull if you have your own website. as it is a html code for a feedback formi most certainly find this usefull for my website, as this is just what i was looking for
- 20/04/2004
- 11:13:44
- Score: 4 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Nicely done, you did it from both sides, where most people on this subject do it only against. A lot of hard work and research has obviously gone into this
- 19/04/2004
- 04:41:23
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
It could use more effort in it, as you only mention a few causes, and dont give much information on them. You dont mention any of the other things like the \"growth of nationalism\" or the build up of armies. The first bit needs to be backed up by the actual information that goes with it. And mention your sources
- 19/04/2004
- 04:33:07
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I have actual been thinking about death alot, and worrying about it, where every little thing reminds me about i.But this makes me think deeper, and i nolonger worryAs for the essay, it was nicly done, you noted your sources. a good essay
- 19/04/2004
- 04:25:56
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Very good essay. I agree with the others, you could have included a source other than "Class notes" and "psychology textbook"Give actual names and resourcesother than that very good
- 18/04/2004
- 13:18:39
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
A good argument, but there should be some mention of how different relgions feel about it. And how that the rights of both the clone child and the normal child might differ, due only to how other people treat them
- 18/04/2004
- 11:28:34
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.