Geez freddy that's all u got'i like it' a half dead monkey could come up with something better
- 31/10/2004
- 15:02:42
- Score: 11 out of 19 people found this comment useful.
you r so right. sport's is nothing without violence. all wrestling would be without violence is people getting pissed at eachother. it is entertaining but that's only because it's followed by a fightLONG LIVE VIOLENCE
- 31/10/2004
- 14:56:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
sry didnt know what i was doingthis is part 2
- 24/08/2004
- 13:33:45
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
u must really like poems johnanywayreally good essay though i'm not a real poems fan
- 17/08/2004
- 11:23:30
- Score: 32 out of 38 people found this comment useful.
i once had a dream that i was stuck in a blenderdont ask me y thoughgreat story ff
- 17/08/2004
- 11:17:02
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
interesting styletry writing mysterie storiesi think that would go well with your style
- 17/08/2004
- 11:12:11
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
now that u mention iti never finished the second addition to that story
- 16/08/2004
- 21:38:45
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
ignore AEKhe's just looking for a argumentns essay thoughbut maybe u should cram a few more facts into it cuz all i learned was a denied secreat code for war and that war creates jobs
- 09/08/2004
- 22:01:19
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i never new thatthough i know that they burn witchesdid u know that joan of arc(a hero)was burned at the stake being accused of withchcraft?we got to see a really good movie bout it. kinda like the ones in movie theaters
- 07/08/2004
- 17:22:50
- Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
this is still not helping
- 01/08/2004
- 19:45:20
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this is nice man but it's like a bunch of words and letters put together. i suggest u make it easier with a step one, step two kind of thing. just like teach us how to hack into someone u hate's comp and tell us where we need to change to hack a different persons. i need to know cuz there's this kid at school that we all hate cept he thinks he's all cool and we like him, so this would be a cool kinda revenge. i'll mess up his comp whenever he says hi to me. muahahahahahahahaha
- 30/07/2004
- 22:02:30
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
where the hell am i suppose to use this?
- 29/07/2004
- 21:54:52
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i also think that Depp is cooli especially liked his moviepirates of the carribian
- 29/07/2004
- 21:52:23
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
really cool but i like dragons moremaybe i should have a essay bout dragons...oh well
- 29/07/2004
- 21:48:30
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
really interestingkinda like interests me in the movie I,ROBOTu should really thing bout making it paragraphs
- 29/07/2004
- 21:44:28
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
to be honest it's kinda good cept u should make it alot longer. a few short paragraphs doesnt work for a informative essay
- 29/07/2004
- 21:39:09
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i wondered about this subject my selfgreat essay thoughdo u think we should control how many kids ppl can have?i'm just wondering who does
- 29/07/2004
- 18:38:25
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
anyways really good essay, i could really connect. i never realized i had so much in common with forkman. i once caught some crabs and they died within 4 hours...i knew i shouldnt have put them in the sun
- 23/07/2004
- 11:27:07
- Score: 25 out of 28 people found this comment useful.
great story phantomhey m_iria_m who gave phantoms story the:(?
- 20/07/2004
- 21:48:38
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
i am godlessyet if he is true i would think of a fag in the cloud that hate's me.
- 20/07/2004
- 18:33:45
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
really nice essay, god info and interesting especially the part bout the tasmania devils. Did yyou add a bibliography?
- 26/06/2004
- 21:18:27
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
interesting way you see smoking. THis is the first time smoking is put positively and it really got me thinking. I also agree that life is way too plain without the risk of death
- 18/06/2004
- 13:42:04
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
just out of curiosity is the main character based on someone you know?
- 17/06/2004
- 21:34:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your right Phantome this is a very good story developing at it's own pace. Your story is a slow and imaginative story. Mine is a fast moving story that leves much less room for imagination of the reader. You did a very good job of writing in the characters voice(a very rare trait). Good job
- 16/06/2004
- 18:33:05
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
i agree that this is a general essay but i do think that this also has alot of info on violence in school and how it's expressed.
- 14/06/2004
- 22:05:44
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
after reading 3 comments, two of them says that i spelled stuff wrong. So here's the deal, i'm good at writing stories but i suck at spelling so just to tell you and if i did spell it wrong, tell me in your comment and i'll watch for it in the future.Thanks
- 13/06/2004
- 15:33:06
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
interesting how you compaired a man of good to a man of evil. Its like compairing an angel to the devil, but you did it so good job. Even if they made a mark in history, it was for oppisite principals. Overall this is a model compairative essay
- 12/06/2004
- 23:43:01
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
really good essay and info. adding your biblioagrphy was good to since not many do that
- 09/06/2004
- 18:44:20
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
it's interesting how you showed the works of two people, oppisite to their views, and able to let the essay have a good flow. good job
- 09/06/2004
- 18:23:24
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
amazing how you can think up of this stuff. Not expected and very good. Also very true.
- 09/06/2004
- 18:00:14
- Score: 21 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
this is only the first part of the story since i hope to keep it going for a long time. The kid died happy is that sick? i mean who whouldnt want to die happy that scared or depressed. This story was made up by me 100% so if you find another story like it tell me where you saw it and if it's there the i'll kiss my butt
- 02/06/2004
- 23:59:48
- Score: 14 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
i messed up. the tittle should beWhy Shouldnt We Send Man to Mars
- 02/06/2004
- 18:25:20
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
this was my first or second essay i did on this site so i didn't know we had to put a bibloagraphy so... sorry
- 02/06/2004
- 17:30:13
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this is a really good poem. It may seem a bit confusing since no one really fears a shadow, but the style is amazing and catches a readers attention. It's also very mysterious
- 02/06/2004
- 17:21:07
- Score: 24 out of 25 people found this comment useful.
you wernt kidding when you said this had a dramatic flair were you??Anyway, it was a really well writen and very interesting. I was problably just as interested in the story as the kids that you told it to. Too bad not all history was this exciting or i would have a A+ in that class
- 27/05/2004
- 21:13:46
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
i think this is a really good essay cept i think it needs a little more explanition to the information and you do need to add the bibliography, but it's ok since your new. if you look on my essays i didnt put a bibliography either
- 27/05/2004
- 19:19:30
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
good essay, whats with all the tabs?
- 14/05/2004
- 00:28:52
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
really good essay i just wanted to say, keep up the good work
- 13/05/2004
- 19:36:10
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
yes yes YES BRILIIENT BRILLIENT BRILLIENT
- 13/05/2004
- 19:26:43
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i agree with john but i think they should delet the other essay without the biblography
- 13/05/2004
- 19:23:43
- Score: 5 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
really good essay, perfect to help with my project thanks
- 13/05/2004
- 19:18:35
- Score: 12 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
i thought your essay was very informative and interesting. I rember seeing spring-heeled Jack in a Jackie Chan cartoon show on kidsWB. its for the bay area of california so you might not know of it.Anyway good job
- 13/05/2004
- 18:58:20
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
i read you story and thought it was really good and from the heart. The stuff about keeping your memories are true unless you had a awful childhood like on the streets oor something, anyway it gave me an idea for an essay so read it when you have time. Thats it for now, over-and-out
- 13/05/2004
- 18:52:31
- Score: 9 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
its true that there are a few grammer mistakes but hey were all not perfect, anyway it was a great essay so give yourself a pat on the back because you just made one guys history project a hell of a lot easyier.
- 12/05/2004
- 21:40:32
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this was an excellent essay and very story like. It also was very interesting so i didnt stop reading it till the last word
- 12/05/2004
- 19:26:59
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this is a very good essay cept i dont think there is a bibliography
- 12/05/2004
- 18:20:36
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this essay isnt bad cept it is kinda confusing
- 06/05/2004
- 18:45:34
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.