Very well researched. Author definately knew what they were talking about. One of the best I've read.
- 22/10/2006
- 17:40:31
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Seems thoroughly researched. Enjoyed reading it. It really is a shame what happened. Should teach us a lesson so as to not have it happen again. Once again, job well done.
- 22/10/2006
- 17:32:19
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i think you can pretty much guess what im going to say. except for a shaky introduction, it was very well written and i love how real you made it seem, as if i was there. once again i enjoy reading you work and especially like the first person point of view. once again great job.
- 30/06/2004
- 19:43:01
- Score: 31 out of 35 people found this comment useful.
this is once again excellently written. once again i enjoy how you used first person and i only envy you for having such an astonishing professor, one who agrees with just writing what comes, rather than following a set of rules. i like how you made this very real for the readers, and i can see there was a lot of emotion in this and a lot of time went into writing this. once again great job
- 30/06/2004
- 19:37:22
- Score: 40 out of 43 people found this comment useful.
Overall i thought it was very well written. I too am usually reprimanded for using I, we, or starting with "I think that" but here i think that was appropriate in order to emphasize your point of view. But overall i thought i was well written. I even went and read the original text before because i hadnt heard of it before and i liked it. Keep up the good work and i look forward to reading more of your good work.
- 30/06/2004
- 19:23:25
- Score: 73 out of 77 people found this comment useful.
Overall pretty well written. Your thesis could have been more to the point. Try not to digress as much. Other than that job well done.
- 16/05/2004
- 13:40:45
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Overall is good. Like others said, your thesis needs to be a bit more powerful. Some spelling mistakes, and you need to do less digressing. Other than that, pretty well done.
- 25/04/2004
- 14:49:13
- Score: 16 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
Very concise and interesting. You sound like a natural writer. It must come easy. I enjoyed reading them very much. Job well done.
- 25/04/2004
- 14:46:50
- Score: 12 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
This was very well written. Good knowledge of the facts and the novel. I like the use of quotes to support your thesi. Anyone who needs a representation of characters from Frankenstein, I would recommend this in a heartbeat. Very well written
- 25/04/2004
- 14:42:43
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Overall for a 10th grader, I would say this was pretty well written. Your facts are there and it seems you did your research and know what you are talking about. However, you digress a little too much. Try keeping on topic and only talk about what's relevant to you thesis. Otherwise your paper will be about the wrong thing. So overall I feel this was pretty well written. I would give it either a high B+ or a low A-.
- 25/04/2004
- 14:39:18
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This was very thoroughly researched. It was very well written. The facts are all there and he seems he knows what he's talking about. Job well done. I would recommend this to anyone
- 25/04/2004
- 14:19:22
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I thought overall it was well written. The paragraphs on Frankenstein and the monster were good. Although, I'm not sure I would compare the external conflict of Walton being stuck in the ice to the internal conflicts that both Victor and the monster have. Other than that I thought it was pretty well written and you knew what you were talking about.
- 22/04/2004
- 15:37:37
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This seems like it was very thoroughly researched and I would recommend it to anyone
- 21/04/2004
- 17:08:32
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.