A very interesting and creative aspect you have taken on. Just a note, you have shortened 'anymore' to 'nemore' in the final paragraph.
- 23/08/2005
- 08:44:06
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It's a good personal analysis but lacks any structure.
- 23/07/2005
- 23:44:07
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A quick and informative summary of the Rubella Virus. Some of the words used are a little advanced for Grade 7, but interesting and factual nonetheless.
- 14/06/2005
- 10:36:20
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I'm not entirely sure of the level accepted from Grade 7 anymore, but Im certain that submitting an essay which is almost entirely derived from a website/book isn't acceptable.http://www.artchive.com/artchive/D/dali.htmlYour entire essay was taken from that URL, except for the final paragraph which is a basic analysis of one of Dali's works.
- 22/05/2005
- 10:33:32
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.