Didn't quite cut it for me; grammar was iffy, particularly at "Four of these," and I found claims a bit unsupported. For example, I saw "multi-stage rockets," and wanted to know more; however, the discussion later seemed restricted to the subjects about which most already are aware (gunpowder, etc). However, though I did not see substantiation for some topics, I am encouraged to go and learn more, which, I suppose, is ultimately the goal. I didn't like the way you left me hanging, but that's all part of the process of learning to write.
- 22/04/2004
- 21:21:23
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