There is no real introduction or conclusion to this essay.
- 26/04/2004
- 01:52:15
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Lots of informatoin with supporting details! I also like the webliography at the end.
- 23/04/2004
- 02:22:06
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
VERY WELL WRITTEN! I'M IMPRESSED! THIS KID'S A WRITER!
- 23/04/2004
- 01:44:37
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The structure of this eassy is unorganized. It is very informative and interesting but needs a better layout. The writer has a great train of thought... it just needs a little work. I'm not trying to be rude... I like it, but I needs structure.
- 23/04/2004
- 01:37:42
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This eassy was written to inform the reader of the importance of one soldier in The United States. It is amazing how many men are fighting for our country right now and how much each and every one of them mean. This Audie Murphy has set the standards for each of our soldiers fighting for our country right now. Thank you American Soldiers and God Bless You and your families.
- 23/04/2004
- 01:27:16
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.