You did mostly what you said you would do in the opening paragraph. You showed the different definitions of the word happiness, you showed how there are different examples that the word can be applied to, but what about the search for happiness? In my opinion, I think that it would be better if you elaborated more on why people want happiness. However, the plus point of this essay is that you addressed certain pointers well. For example, you stated that people do not necessarily have to be rewarded to be happy, and personally, I agree with that.
- 26/04/2004
- 09:28:40
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