User Details For: GhostOfTomJoad
Essay List
Conflicts of Class and Communication in Calaveras County
- 1190 words (5 pages)
- 62
- 0
Traditional Farcical Elements Found in Kevin Smith's "Clerks"
- 954 words (4 pages)
- 19
- 0
Comedy and Tragedy in Alan Moore's "Watchmen"
- 933 words (4 pages)
- 49
- 0
Sean Penn: As Much Director as Actor, Even When he's Not
- 754 words (3 pages)
- 28
- 0
Sex Roles and Gender Identity in the Music of Bruce Springsteen
- 1130 words (5 pages)
- 57
- 0
The Violation of Cinematic Expectations and Conventions in "Cradle Will Rock"
- 1206 words (5 pages)
- 27
- 0
School Shootings in Mainstream American Comic Books
- 839 words (3 pages)
- 30
- 0
Comments List
A simple thought
This is, by and large, a pretty good writeup of the work. What I would chiefly recommend (and I know I'm guilty of it sometimes, too, though I try to minimize) is that you find a way to avoid the first-person for most academic papers. This is especially true, obviously, if you're submitting them to this site for evaluation and potential adoption by others--because others may not have the same life experiences as you, and while they will share your view on the book it might put them off reading the entire article fully.- 26/04/2004
- 12:24:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.