I feel some pro-communist bias here... of course, i think that is what you went out to do - to persuade your readers that communism is good. I think you wrote well, and you have some decent material in it, but i dont really agree with any of it. However, I think it IS good that you are forming your own opinion, even if you may fancy yourself as Stalin's sucessor.
- 02/05/2004
- 04:34:24
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Good stuff about China. Is good for historical info.
- 02/05/2004
- 04:29:10
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Sry, didn't mean to.
- 01/05/2004
- 20:41:33
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This could turn into a good essay, but needs to expand on everything that has been stated here. A bit of expanding and this would be a great historical essay.
- 01/05/2004
- 18:14:19
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Good stuff about the US's involvment with Japan during the war. Could have expanded a little bit around some of the issues. Nice conclusion too.
- 01/05/2004
- 18:12:12
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Really good at determining the causes and effects of French imperialism in Vietnam. Good stuff about the US in the end about the US's paranoia about anything communist. Could have had a bit more oomf to your conclusion.
- 01/05/2004
- 18:10:21
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Pretty good discussion about what type of person Mao really was. With a fair bit of myth around him, to be able to sort around all that to write this was good and could be really handy.
- 01/05/2004
- 18:08:17
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Not bad at telling a general history of this dynasty. Could have talked a tad more about the results of the Song dynasty itself, like what happened after they collapsed.
- 01/05/2004
- 18:07:20
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Good at the end for comparing the Nazi war crimes vs the Japanese war crimes. Nice amount of words too for a regular school essay :)
- 01/05/2004
- 18:04:29
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Great for a general overview of the asian empires. Could split it up into a bunch of different essays if you picked one point and ran with it.
- 01/05/2004
- 17:59:59
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.