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  • HSC response

    im sure everyone has a different style of prep for exams. From a HSC perspective i would comment saying these are almost to breif going into trials (and im only in yr 11). good luck with the exams though.
    • 22/08/2005
    • 05:33:49
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good yr 10 work

    ill commend u on your structure, because it really helps to break down such a technical essay(content). quiet consise and a very sound essay in full
    • 22/08/2005
    • 05:29:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Fair arguement

    the idea of people that get pleasure out of another mans death sickens me. Although the crime may be worth the death penalty, i agree strongly in you saying "We should give the wretched criminal the peace or dignity of dying without making it a public event, a circus. After all, we, the good guys"cheers, good read
    • 22/08/2005
    • 05:22:23
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • A good life lesson

    good to see u didnt persist with the job; to know enough is enough and insist on improving your circumstances.All the best to the future
    • 22/08/2005
    • 05:14:26
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    great dept and very concise at that. It was just what i needed for apart of my assignment. thnx a lot
    • 09/08/2005
    • 21:03:25
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Huckie and finskers

    yer i really admire them aswell, bit short and i would have liked to read more on the issue
    • 09/08/2005
    • 21:00:31
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hitler

    hitler was a political genius in himself, although cruel and sinsister. you have expressed a clear and concise point, well done
    • 09/08/2005
    • 20:57:15
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree with u

    yer schools school be free, but in some respects they need to gain ther own revenue to fund them better
    • 09/08/2005
    • 03:46:52
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • This is utter load of crap

    im sorry but i feel this is an essay based on your personal opinion and perspective of african americans in america today..
    • 22/05/2005
    • 15:46:30
    • Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Concise

    very concise for a 8th grader!!!!!!!
    • 20/05/2005
    • 21:09:15
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Yer sweet

    thnx a lot good essay and insight into the australian economy
    • 18/03/2005
    • 06:47:22
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Thnx buddy

    helped me a lot with the analyzing of Australia, cheers
    • 18/03/2005
    • 06:40:08
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Civil war

    good job, although the structure of the essay was pretty poor, and you haven't explored your key issues and analyzed them, for instance you talked about the war coming from multiple causation, i mean sure it can be broken down into such catergories as economic, cultural and political disparities between the north and the south but what did they all derive from...... ? Slavery can be seen as the tipping point for the civl war, i mean you can look at most major events and key themes such as states rights... but would have these evolved if slavery was absent? I pose the question, was slavery the real cause for the civil war?
    • 16/02/2005
    • 04:54:24
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Titled: Capital Punishment Should Be Brought Back as it is the Only Way to Prevent Serious Crimes

    I do not believe that capital punishment should be re-introduced, your arguement takes out the justification that most of these convicted men have been motively set of by some sort of child trauma. the prision system is also about Rehabilitating these criminals back into society. I believe many of us take prision at face value.... Shouldn't these people be given another chance??
    • 15/02/2005
    • 00:09:39
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Collapse of the Soviet Union

    through out this analyis you have chronologically depicted the true essence for the collapse of the soviet union. You have sucessfully restricted the topic to: defining, describing and labelling the event and shown how multiple causation had great significance to the topic sentences. althought the linkage can be reshaped to give the text more flow
    • 14/02/2005
    • 23:58:56
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • 1

    u needed to put more techniques such as censorship, u mention it as being totally undemocratic and the government .......yer yer, bringin up censorship would have got u the full marks although this is not a 99% paper, back to junior years
    • 20/09/2004
    • 04:40:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • OMG

    i absolutely loves this paper, it was mind gripping. there is no place for people whom rape girls, it is wrong this shows how much trouble it causes and how it should be attended to......u almost had my tears
    • 28/05/2004
    • 08:26:47
    • Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • I know what you did last summer

    i know where u got this essay from, im a remindin u of sparknotes.com
    • 25/05/2004
    • 10:53:54
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Life saver

    genuine life saver, this essay is one of a kind and saved me from gettin a crappo mark tomoz in an english exam
    • 25/05/2004
    • 10:49:17
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Revolution: nickcrappy

    compared to some of your other essay\'s and standards regarding writings you have excelled greatly over them, im a lil tired of comon on last night, i was up till 4 in the morning, you have some talent....use it, good work
    • 20/05/2004
    • 04:45:38
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A Personal Anaylisis of the Original Book, Voodoo Science: The Road from Foolishness to Fraud by Robert L. Park

    thats some top shit for year 7, a hard topic for a low level and you have accomplished it with ease, include footnotes in the final work for top marks as well as a bibliography, good work.. look out to rate my work if you have the chance
    • 19/05/2004
    • 10:18:46
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Thnx spoon

    ur a genius i think ill write one now, haha u better rate it when ur finished, i agree ma bad -
    • 19/05/2004
    • 10:12:30
    • Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • "Dramatic Influences of Change"

    the paper isnt exactly essay format: by this i mean your introductory and main body of the essay is almost no existant, its as if your doing your homework and rambling on just to fill up space, i like your use of Similes which create vivid images inside the viewers mind and example of this would be "blood was as cold as ice". good work -- appriecate if u commented on one of my essay's -- LaNks
    • 19/05/2004
    • 10:08:26
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Spoon has spooned another

    look at your work man, society frown's on people like you who have to cheat there way to the top....what a joke of an attempt
    • 19/05/2004
    • 09:51:07
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • "Porphyria's Lover"

    highly praised essay, strange introduction but the essay was clear aparts from that and was straight to the point, well done.
    • 19/05/2004
    • 09:43:57
    • Score: 34 out of 44 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    your work is quite good and ill commend you on it as i have no idea when it comes to poems, its well structured so it flows nice and easy and adjectives really create a vivid image in my head, --rate for a rate--
    • 19/05/2004
    • 09:29:31
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Well written

    In animal farm Orwell gives the animals certain characterisic's of humankind, this is called personification. you could have researched more into the study notes off other websites, sparknotes.com is a fine example of this, try rate some of my essay's in return, ill keep track of ur work as im in yr 10 and ive done all this before, well structured and written. i would like to see more
    • 19/05/2004
    • 09:20:21
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Why dont u become shakespeare himself

    i would consider you as a very knowledgable source and your work is well written, i would focus on the use of sources and acknoledge them as you are not a primary source yourself otherwise its a good essay
    • 19/05/2004
    • 08:06:13
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Well written

    the moive review is nice and light at the same time as informative, well written for the writting style deserve the points for it
    • 18/05/2004
    • 04:19:47
    • Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • High quality

    deserved the marks and from just a quick skim read, it looks well structured and very bold points stick right out...rate my comment and ill rate urs to come, LaNks
    • 17/05/2004
    • 07:05:35
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Reasons+1

    dont know what planet your on but you have some reasons behind gettin this by the admin's, for an essay its more of a extended joke, comon like 360 words.....
    • 17/05/2004
    • 06:50:31
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Cosi cosi, (italin)

    its an average essay, through just breif skim reading, Business studies is a hard topic to do but capturing the key points is essential in writting a informative piece of work, sometimes hard work can go to waste if the essay doesnt reach its key issues addressed, again it was structured well and it should have deserved a much greater mark
    • 17/05/2004
    • 06:23:30
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • High-quality

    The structure and compositiion of this essay is of a high-quality i suggest the usage of various footnote as they seem to be absent from your work, good effort otherwise.
    • 17/05/2004
    • 06:15:34
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Well written

    the structure and the key motives that you express in this essay are superior to a yr 10 level
    • 08/05/2004
    • 22:55:53
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • College

    your essay provides insight into years to come to many students seeking and asking the question "Is College Still Worth The Expense?"
    • 02/05/2004
    • 09:43:37
    • Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
  • Great work

    for such a significant event in modern history u have show people how to capture it -good work
    • 02/05/2004
    • 09:37:41
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.