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• Why we should legalize euthanasia

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• Mexicans and their soical issues they face. Talk about their history, culture, family life, and social issues. Includes bibliography

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• "Eating Chinese Food Naked"

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• "Eskimo" or "Inuit" myths about how the world was created

  This essay needs a concluson. It just ends. Also try using an attention getter in the introduction, so you keep the audieneces attention. Overall, for an eighth grader this is pretty good!
  • 12/05/2004
  • 10:18:04
  • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
    

• "Food Fight: The Truth about GMOs"

  I think this essay would be better, if they added an introduction. They kinf of just jump right into information. Maybe try adding a attentuon getter, for example, a statistic. The transitions need some work as well. I also believe this paper needs to be more than two paragraphs. Trying developing more on the myths.
  • 10/05/2004
  • 11:00:54
  • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.