User Details For: Muse

Essay List
Comments List
  • Helplessdemise

    Aw, thanks! To be honest, I didn't think this essay was very good, I rushed it. But thanks for the comment. Wow, I helped somebody, amazing!And thanks also, RickJamesX, it's nice to be appriciated.
    • 07/10/2004
    • 10:54:10
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Is prostituion a crime?

    In this essay, the main point of it is that prostitution is bad and that women are forced into it, but that is not necessarily true. Some women actually choose to go into that proffession out of their own will. Also, men can be prostitutes too. I agree with the points that are brought up in this such as prostitution in India, but you have only got one point of view here. It's a good essay, but should have other views in it.
    • 02/08/2004
    • 06:48:02
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very good!

    This really is a good essay. The points raised are excellent and well explained. I agree with the overall statement too, that people should have the chioce to die. Why do we have double standards for animals and humans? Animals can't say if they are in pain and want to be put down, but we can, and animals are put down none-the-less but we aren't. It should be our choice as we're the ones who have to live with it, not the government. Great essay!
    • 08/07/2004
    • 11:02:30
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Well explained

    The whole theme of society back then is very well explained. The actual pattern on the yellow wallpaper should have been analysed a little bit more, and I thought that Jane was Jennie's full name? I don't know. Good essay though.
    • 08/07/2004
    • 10:51:22
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • The Yellow Wallpaper

    I think the yellow wallpaper could have been analysed a bit more, and also John, her husband, could have been mentioned more. And I was just wondering, how do you know the character's name? I couldn't find it anywhere in the text! All in all, a good essay that could have been expanded on a bit more.
    • 08/07/2004
    • 10:44:04
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • "Simply selfish"

    I do agree wth this essay, it's human nature to care about ones self more then others. It's a good subject, but could be expanded on to explain more points. Good work though!
    • 06/07/2004
    • 15:33:43
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    It would be good if you had gone on. It is a good essay, if a little brief, but the description is very good, especialy of the emotions.
    • 06/07/2004
    • 15:27:34
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    The short sentences really capture the mood. Strange subject though!
    • 06/07/2004
    • 15:21:30
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    It's very descriptive, you really feel what the person is feeling. Maybe you could add some more at the end to make a longer story, I'll gladly read the rest of that! All in all, quite good, needs more of a plot.
    • 06/07/2004
    • 15:17:39
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    It had good descriptions in it, but you do use "I" too much. Overall, it's an average essay.
    • 05/07/2004
    • 10:06:22
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Tess of the d'Urbervilles

    My teacher normally says to me that my conclusions aren't clear, so I decided to be perfectly clear! Thank you for the comment, I'll remember that. I would like some things to expand on and to put in though.
    • 04/07/2004
    • 15:42:51
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Conclusion

    I loved the last few lines, they very deep, if not a little chilling! I also liked the way you go through all the lines and points in detail, most people would just skim through some lines and go into great detail on others, normally because they don't fully understand them.Great essay in all, keep it up.
    • 04/07/2004
    • 14:54:54
    • Score: 36 out of 40 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    I really did enjoy this essay, interpretations interest me because I like to see what a poem actually means in terms I can understand (I'm not too good at poems!). Again, the use of "I", though most teachers say not to do it, I find it's a good way of putting your thoughts into it and to show that you thought of them. I'm not allowed to use them in my essays though, I get marked down if I do. Your teacher must be really good!It's a great essay for others to understand moer about poetry.
    • 04/07/2004
    • 14:42:15
    • Score: 40 out of 43 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    I'm not really a person who reads much poems, but this interpretaion really makes me want to read more. When I read most poems, they're hard to understand, so I am impressed that you have understood it so well and can expand on what it means. And I don't necessarily agree with some others with the "I" thing. It brings in a more personal touch and makes it easier to see your ideas, if you get what I mean.Very good essay in all.
    • 04/07/2004
    • 14:24:34
    • Score: 58 out of 62 people found this comment useful.
  • V. good

    This really is good! The lesson in it is one we all have to learn, let the person who is without sin cast the first stone, as it were! Great work.
    • 04/07/2004
    • 14:06:07
    • Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice!

    This was very suspenseful. It gives what it promises! If you were only given 30 minutes, I would love to see what you could produce if you wrote it out of your own time!
    • 27/06/2004
    • 13:56:12
    • Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Good

    I love the description at the start. It's agreat way of making the story seem nice and light, but then it changes. Good description of children. Very deep.
    • 24/06/2004
    • 15:29:37
    • Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Okay

    The subject is good, but too short. The last line is very deep. Give more thought to the ret of it.
    • 24/06/2004
    • 08:11:04
    • Score: 14 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
  • Half way there

    The question brought up in the essay is a good subject, but you need to expand on the ideas, not just on eshort paragraph. Link all the ideas together.
    • 24/06/2004
    • 07:58:48
    • Score: 11 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Story

    Good story, it had a fast pace, good for a suspensful story. Ending a little suprising, but if there is more, great!Good villain too.
    • 24/06/2004
    • 07:47:52
    • Score: 16 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
  • Who is worse, Alec or Angel?

    A very good essay, it covers everything and it fits in well together. I also have to say, that Angel did hurt Tess worse, emotional pain is a lot worse then physical pain.
    • 21/06/2004
    • 07:43:25
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This is a really good essay on Tess of the d'Urbervilles. Although, my teacher wouldn't have let me get away with all the questions! She would have told me to put in answers as well. Great essay though.
    • 21/06/2004
    • 07:32:12
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent

    The setting out of the paragraphs could be better, but the content is excellent. Use of opinion is used well.
    • 13/05/2004
    • 10:38:09
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.