I disagree with your thesis and you do not have enough points to back up your thesis.
- 09/04/2006
- 00:18:10
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You have good points, yet you have not considered the opposing points such as the money required for jailtime and the risk of another offence when released.
- 11/02/2006
- 04:57:25
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It is not bad but you should expand on some points. Why is the obligation so sacred? (explain family relations during the time of Sophocles.
- 07/02/2006
- 22:27:14
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This is a good commentary on a difficult poem. Keep up the good work.
- 15/12/2005
- 00:53:36
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You have sweeping statistics that need to be sited properly. If they are true, you might have just altered my view of the Death Penalty.
- 09/12/2005
- 00:30:41
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Can you get off Cheathouse and go somewhere else. THis is terrible.
- 07/12/2005
- 02:22:02
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This isn't bad, but to become an essay, it needs more work.
- 04/12/2005
- 04:06:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
There are very good examples and comparisons. Very helpful.
- 04/12/2005
- 04:05:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think this a detailed commentary. It covers the poems from beginning to end. Good job!
- 04/12/2005
- 03:52:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Essay leans in favor of the project with little concern or evaluation of the disadvantages of such huge investment. Mozal project involves huge input from foreign entities, thus contributing to even more debts and creating economic dependency on the part of Mozambique.
- 14/05/2005
- 19:13:24
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This is a high quality paper, keep up the good work. Just try to keep things more streamline.
- 12/03/2005
- 19:29:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
There is a interesting essay but is rather short. This essay is not too profound, could be improved
- 09/03/2005
- 02:08:41
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
well organized and informative. You seem to be warning others without using much exaggerated comment, that's good.
- 03/02/2005
- 21:38:09
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This summary is not bad
- 26/01/2005
- 21:17:28
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It's good, but not really an essay, and Batman did not have bat-like ablities, he's one of the superheros without and superpowers
- 08/01/2005
- 10:56:08
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right now, it's a big paragraph, it gets very easy to get lost, just fix that and it'll be good.
- 07/01/2005
- 20:10:10
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this looks like a grade 9 homework assignment, nothing close to an essay.
- 07/01/2005
- 17:51:58
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I like your examples because they can prove a point without too much explanation.
- 06/01/2005
- 20:54:50
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Mind provoking in some places, good overall.
- 06/01/2005
- 20:39:31
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well done, this might not interest many people, but it certainly interests me
- 04/01/2005
- 19:24:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
for a gr. 10, this is a pitiful essay; starting the paragraph with "Because", use "since" or "Due to". Your paragraphs are only 3 sentences long. Find more stats and expand.
- 04/01/2005
- 19:20:40
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you have a few good stats here which can be expanded and elaborated, this essay is similar to mine.
- 04/01/2005
- 19:18:31
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Good job, good siting, great setup, can be shortened tho
- 15/12/2004
- 23:32:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
what a good essay, and informative. I think it is well rounded.
- 15/12/2004
- 23:26:31
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Seeing that you are in grade 6, this is really good. But you still need to work on structure, KEEP TRYING!
- 25/11/2004
- 18:25:25
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
It is good overall but you need a more focused viewpoint in your arguments.
- 25/11/2004
- 18:24:02
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
awesome footnotes and great overall
- 24/11/2004
- 22:57:03
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Hey, I'm in IB too, so i know how you feel. I understand why you would say such things, yet I found some points not very clear.
- 24/11/2004
- 22:42:57
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it's good! you have explained yourself very well in my situations.
- 23/11/2004
- 21:11:43
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I like your approach to this idea and topic, but i think you need to elaborate more on different topics.
- 23/11/2004
- 20:29:38
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