i wasn't quite expecting an ending like that.i thought the lad would be pulled to safety.very good for your age though.different,but a bit too graphic for me.
- 30/07/2004
- 16:06:59
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
it serves you right for begin so shallow although i would have felt exactly the same. having said that, i wouldnt meet up with sum1 i had met over the net.A very intersting and informative read.
- 25/06/2004
- 14:52:24
- Score: 18 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
Wow!you really know how to make the reader want to keep on reading.great ending with the five bucks.well done and keep writing!
- 22/05/2004
- 06:15:03
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
i like your ideas, and enjoyed reading it. good job!!!
- 17/05/2004
- 16:32:17
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i agree with the issues your raised but i am unsure of your purpose in this essay. were you trying to persuade me to think that way, or mearly inform me of your opinions. good topic to chose but please explain things a little more clearly. well done.
- 17/05/2004
- 15:52:33
- Score: 13 out of 13 people found this comment useful.