This was good and it explained a lot. Nice work.
- 21/11/2004
- 06:49:03
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I liked this one. It was informative and easy to understand/read. I especially liked how you elaborated on the chromosome part of the disorder.
- 27/05/2004
- 17:21:11
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Very informative but could be better structured.
- 27/05/2004
- 17:13:58
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I think the support to the thesis could built on and better developed.The essay also needs a bibliography in order to let others know where you got some of the information.
- 27/05/2004
- 17:10:47
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You have amazing writing skills-- concise and well constructed. This is a great piece, so thanks for sharing! Nice job.
- 26/05/2004
- 22:09:05
- Score: 37 out of 44 people found this comment useful.
As chilling as the poem was itself, your break-down of the lines made it more creepy. Though it starts with an interesting introduction, the rest was easy-flowing, well constructed and a good read all in all. Nice job.Congrats, by the way, on reaching over 100000.
- 26/05/2004
- 21:57:30
- Score: 39 out of 43 people found this comment useful.
Reading this inspired me to listen to the song-- in order to better relate the actual music with your words. Making up for its abrupt ending, is its well constructed conciseness. Nice job!
- 26/05/2004
- 21:50:32
- Score: 19 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
If these notes could be made into a well structed essay, it'd make for a much more interesting read (essay-wise).On another note...It's too bad that these things happen to children because kids should be allowed to retain their innocence and that spark in their eyes, which you described had been replaced with misery in one child.The information being shared is quite clear, and it's sad that these things happen-- all over the world.
- 26/05/2004
- 21:36:59
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
That was pretty good! For a short one, it explained a lot about the characters while keeping the story going. Nice job.
- 26/05/2004
- 07:29:39
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I just want to comment on how well written this essay is. It has plenty of background and resources that help support your opinion, well developed introduction and thesis.I also agree with you being in favor of physician assisted suicide. I think that it is up to the patient and varies with each situation.Again, congrats on a job well done.
- 25/05/2004
- 13:22:02
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
It has good information, and styled well. Having citations would make it better.
- 18/05/2004
- 22:04:10
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well this essay has some information that can be a great add on to other essays especially because it deals specifically with the impact credt cards have on society.
- 09/05/2004
- 13:30:07
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.