This is a very controversial subject. Not everyone will agree, good way to bring in the sources to back up your theories. Needs some grammar and wording work. Not too bad!
- 07/03/2006
- 21:38:44
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Made very good points in the essay. Included information to back up opinion.I would include more facts and less opinion statements though to make the essay stronger.
- 04/03/2006
- 04:20:54
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I like what you had to say about the two party system, great information!! I never actually thought of political parties and if the constitution allowed it. Good Job!
- 04/03/2005
- 14:37:28
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I thought that this was a well written essay. Remember, though, that that the conclusion sums up what already talked about in the body of the essay. It should be expanded.
- 27/02/2005
- 17:05:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I think the essay is too packed with information for the normal individual without knowledge of the area, and some of the information could be removed to make the essay more flowing and interesting.
- 27/02/2005
- 00:39:19
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very good essay. Good analysis of the elements of a tragedy and comparison to Aristotle's definition. Great work!
- 25/05/2004
- 22:07:21
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good Essay, Well organized and information packed. I liked how it was concluded and the reference to present day science
- 18/05/2004
- 16:51:10
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very good essay that draws off of personal experience to drive a point home. Well organized and worded. Great Job!
- 18/05/2004
- 16:47:04
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
The content and facts are not supported by any sources. The author probably isn't an authority on the subject of pollution. The many grammar mistakes would suggest that the author's native language isn't English.
- 17/05/2004
- 23:28:45
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
That was interesting. I just learned something I didn't know. I think it was well organized and thought out. Good job!
- 15/05/2004
- 22:37:46
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This was a good topic that was presented very well. I think that some statistics would enhance the essay, but it was presented very well. Keep up the good work. Great Essay!
- 15/05/2004
- 18:57:42
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I really liked the essay about the former president; it was very imformative, well written, and put together well. What is Bush doing now? Maybe include that as well. Very good job & Keep up the good work!
- 15/05/2004
- 16:56:52
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I liked the essay. Was well thought and well written. Adding thoughts of others in addition to your own would strengthen the essay. Very good though!
- 15/05/2004
- 16:41:54
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I thought this was an okay essay. Consider expanding on the ideas. Good start.
- 14/05/2004
- 11:49:03
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Good information. It's very information packed; for being a biography, it's a little short. I'm sure more important thinks happened in his life than what's included. Expand on it and include more important events. Good start to a paper.
- 13/05/2004
- 12:38:38
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
That essay seems typical for any man, not just an Englishman.
- 13/05/2004
- 12:31:43
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Be careful "Ad Hominen" is a fallacy in persuasion by attacking the person not the writing's facts. You referred to it as an argument. It's an error in logical thinking not an argument.
- 13/05/2004
- 12:22:41
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good essay. It took a stance and supported them. The essay gave statistics, sources weren't cited. Good job though.
- 13/05/2004
- 12:14:32
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I like the paper, but I don't know that the experiment is scientifically sound. The conclusion may be premature without further testing. But okay essay!
- 13/05/2004
- 12:11:29
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a different kind of essay. Good point of view.
- 13/05/2004
- 12:07:40
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The essay was okay. The text gives no explanations to the terms(monosaccharide,disaccharide,etc.) These terms aren't common knowledge outside of science. There was no conclusion to sum up all the information.
- 13/05/2004
- 10:33:44
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good Essay. Good information. Be careful not to abbreviate like "OT", it isn't usually acceptable in papers.
- 13/05/2004
- 10:30:09
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I really liked the essay and the comments. It's a good point of view, and appropriately addresses the opposition. Great Job!
- 13/05/2004
- 10:26:14
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I've read that poem, it was a very good one. I liked the comments you made on symbolism in the poem. Very good interpretation!
- 12/05/2004
- 11:35:55
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Good critique, very opinionated. There are those out there who may express different opinions, What are the good aspects of the movie? Include a few of those as well so the critique isn't too one sided.
- 12/05/2004
- 11:33:01
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I like the paper very much and the opinions that you stated. The papers looks as though it was given lots of thought. Great Job!
- 12/05/2004
- 11:29:14
- Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
I liked the essay. It contained a lot of interesting information. I liked the facts about tendinitis and the treatment, but there was no conclusion to put them both together and reaffirm your thoughts to the reader.
- 11/05/2004
- 18:27:01
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.