I really like the structure and content of this essay. However you did talk about elasticity at the beginning and you assumed the reader would know about it. May be you should have given a very brief description of elasticity. Furthermore you didn't state what type of elasticity: price, income or cross. Since you were talking about the firms demand curves I would have to assume it is price elasticity.
- 12/05/2004
- 08:44:16
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I think your essay was well done. Your examples were very good and relevant to the topic.Hopefully A.I would eventually become available some day but I don't think we have the programming language to allow a fully independent A.I. computer.
- 11/05/2004
- 23:37:17
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very informative essay on antidepressants. The structure and organisation was also pretty good.
- 11/05/2004
- 22:49:57
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
A very informative essay however some of the sentences were very brief and jerky. Probably a little better reorganisation is required.
- 11/05/2004
- 21:44:44
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This essay was extremely well done. The information was well organised. May be in future the author could expand this to the women labour movement in the world. In most countries equality has not been achieved (eg Middle Eastern States).
- 11/05/2004
- 19:30:04
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This was a very well written and informative essay. The structure was also very well done.
- 11/05/2004
- 19:17:22
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I think it was a very interesting essay and it was well written. There are some states that define marriage as between one man and woman. You said that gay marriage would not affect anyone however what about a person in a gay marriage having rights to adopt and other social issues.
- 11/05/2004
- 18:30:03
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
This is an excellent essay. The structure was good however the author jumped in the timeline from 1990 to 1971. The author should have a precise timeline in ascending order of date.
- 11/05/2004
- 18:02:45
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
I think that this essay was very concise to cover this subject area. Some of the point should have been expanded especially the last paragraph where you actually answered the question. Hitler's propaganda made it possible for this hatred for the Jews.
- 11/05/2004
- 11:17:04
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This essay was pretty good in content but needed some examples. The author should have sited examples where hackers have done good such as exposing faults in operating systems such as Windows.However it was a well done essay
- 11/05/2004
- 11:05:20
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.