User Details For: Crabhole

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  • Comma

    Good flow of ideas. However, fluency is occasionally undermined by absence of commas.
    • 20/11/2004
    • 15:53:35
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • :|

    A well-written piece, although some points are not fully developed.
    • 19/11/2004
    • 17:39:55
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Very enlightening

    Great essay! I never realised until now how prevalent Bacchism is in Chinese literature. Very good read.
    • 19/11/2004
    • 17:35:02
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Note

    This essay covers all of the main points of the novel, however briefly.Also, the present tense is always used when referring to texts.
    • 06/07/2004
    • 04:08:42
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Some critism

    You make some excellent points. However, you fail to back up your arguments with exemplary material. Your language is also too colloquial for an essay.
    • 15/05/2004
    • 01:29:22
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.