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First Impressions..
The essay itself is good. Excellent usage of statistics and in-text citation. However, the introduction could stand to be a little more formal and the thesis, for this paper (I will assume it's the first line) needs to be more clearer. Other than that, I think this paper is good.- 08/05/2002
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