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  • An interesting story dream?

    well the only part i dont understand is how he realizes hes floating through the clouds again. I guess if your seeing it from a dreamers perspective, your descriptions are pretty accurate to how a dream feels. nice essay!
    • 27/05/2004
    • 17:20:34
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.

  • An insightful diary.

    besides some spelling errors, this peice of writing is really insightful. Im guessing its supposed to be a diary entry since its not made out to any one. It could have been layed out with a date or dates, too show the reader that its a diary entry. other than that, it has good content.
    • 27/05/2004
    • 15:40:52
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.