While wikipedia may be useful, it is not a good idea to use it as a source, as most teachers question the quality of the information.Also by grade 11, you might want to start citing your sources according to the proper formats, such as MLA.Interesting info though!
- 26/04/2007
- 16:38:58
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Interesting essay, I find the topic of internment during WW2 quite interesting.
- 12/03/2007
- 19:41:51
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good Job, paragraph format next time! was kind of hard to follow.
- 30/11/2004
- 16:11:14
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Well written essay, indept info. Good Job! :)
- 30/11/2004
- 16:05:58
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I never saw this movie and the way you wrote this essay made me feel as if I had. It seems like a wonderful movie (I'm going to rent it from Blockbuster ^_^) and you did an awesome review. I enjoyed reading your essay, good job.
- 20/11/2004
- 13:58:24
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I think you could have expanded more on your oppinions and points. It is a little too short and you said the same things more than once. You could have had a better conclusion. I don't think that this is good quality for grade 10.
- 20/11/2004
- 13:47:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You are truly are amazing this essay is so well written. I don't know how you did it, you did a wonderful job. You have really lent me more insight as to what drugs and alcohol can do to you. I enjoyed reading this essay, Good job.
- 18/11/2004
- 17:22:13
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Great essay, but you could have had a better conclusion! Its great that you notified the reader which line and actthe quote was from in the actual play.Your essay had a good format which was interesting to follow (your oppinion in paragraph format followed by evidence from Romeo and Juliet)
- 17/11/2004
- 18:32:18
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your essay had very indept information and you used a lot of examples from the play justifying your views. i enjoyed reading it but it would have been better if you had stated what line and act the line was from.
- 17/11/2004
- 18:25:45
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I loved that book and i agree with you when you say that Susan Cooper is a good author. Well written essay
- 16/05/2004
- 17:00:35
- Score: 17 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
I had to study the war a while ago and I think that this is a very good essay you cover all the important points! awesome work.Canada roxs!!!!lol
- 16/05/2004
- 14:42:15
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
It is an interesting overview though I think that it could have been longer and more detailed and you could have gone more into why the king needed to impress to other kings. There were a few spelling mistakes.
- 16/05/2004
- 14:01:35
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
i had a bit of trouble with being overconfident lately. I had this huge math exam (Waterloo Gauss math exam) and it was realy important. I did a few copies of earlier exams and always got perfect but when i did the exam, i did not and i was pretty disapointed.
- 16/05/2004
- 13:10:50
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I think that this essay was good but I also think that it could have been shorter and more to the point
- 15/05/2004
- 17:18:35
- Score: 16 out of 19 people found this comment useful.