User Details For: Bluesky1713

Improvement
A decent essay, but you don't need to state what you're going to write about in the paragraph by saying "I'm going to write about ... in this paragraph" You can just write it. You just need to state what you're writing about in your thesis sentence at the beginning, and then from there you can say what you want. Don't include: "In this paragraph (or essay) I will write about ... " It's assumed that you will build off of your topic you've already stated.
- 20/05/2004
- 19:26:39
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good Review
I think you did a great job summing up the film. The bit about the music is a good point and I did notice it in the movie. In The Passion, like in most movies, the music really set the stage for the mood of the audience, and I really liked how well this worked. Debussy did an awesome job with the music for the film. Again, a good job with the review. Some great points and I especially appreciated how someone else noticed the musical aspects/nuances involved. The movie follows the Bible pretty well, but strays away from the truth when the devil gets involved and is worked into the movie. This film is the truth whether people see it as antisematic of not is their choice. It's what happened, it's history.
- 18/05/2004
- 21:47:45
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.