Good points mentioned, but you forgot many important ones!
- 24/10/2004
- 15:22:42
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay received a grade of 86
- 12/07/2004
- 18:34:21
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this essay received a grade of 85
- 12/07/2004
- 14:45:06
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay make many valid points but I think there are a couple of spots that the sentences seem to run on a bit. Overall, very informative!
- 07/07/2004
- 01:28:47
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
this essay received a grade of 88
- 22/06/2004
- 17:05:38
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this essay received an 88 for a grade
- 22/06/2004
- 17:05:15
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Overall, I felt this was a very good essay. You explained each disorder and the systems very well - thought you should have received a higher grade - Better luck next time.
- 15/06/2004
- 00:46:50
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this essay received a grade of 82
- 13/06/2004
- 17:31:34
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
There are many run on sentences and the essay seems to drag - some spelling errors also.
- 31/05/2004
- 16:51:27
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think you showed very nicely how effective and ineffective the Articles of Confederation were to us history
- 26/05/2004
- 15:59:36
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Although this was a good essay, I think some more supporting evidence was needed as to why the articles of confederation failed.
- 26/05/2004
- 15:55:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I thought this was an excellent essay. It clearly showed why the articles of confederation did not work and "solve" all of the nations problems
- 26/05/2004
- 15:51:31
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I really liked the way this essay was written. Both positive and negative sides to the war were shown with many back up statements provided.
- 23/05/2004
- 22:02:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.