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  • Missing points

    Good points mentioned, but you forgot many important ones!
    • 24/10/2004
    • 15:22:42
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Grade

    This essay received a grade of 86
    • 12/07/2004
    • 18:34:21
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Grade

    this essay received a grade of 85
    • 12/07/2004
    • 14:45:06
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good job

    This essay make many valid points but I think there are a couple of spots that the sentences seem to run on a bit. Overall, very informative!
    • 07/07/2004
    • 01:28:47
    • Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Grade

    this essay received a grade of 88
    • 22/06/2004
    • 17:05:38
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Grade

    this essay received an 88 for a grade
    • 22/06/2004
    • 17:05:15
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • GREAT ESSAY

    Overall, I felt this was a very good essay. You explained each disorder and the systems very well - thought you should have received a higher grade - Better luck next time.
    • 15/06/2004
    • 00:46:50
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Grade

    this essay received a grade of 82
    • 13/06/2004
    • 17:31:34
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • NEEDS WORK

    There are many run on sentences and the essay seems to drag - some spelling errors also.
    • 31/05/2004
    • 16:51:27
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice job

    I think you showed very nicely how effective and ineffective the Articles of Confederation were to us history
    • 26/05/2004
    • 15:59:36
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Needs more evidence

    Although this was a good essay, I think some more supporting evidence was needed as to why the articles of confederation failed.
    • 26/05/2004
    • 15:55:54
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • NICE JOB

    I thought this was an excellent essay. It clearly showed why the articles of confederation did not work and "solve" all of the nations problems
    • 26/05/2004
    • 15:51:31
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great job!

    I really liked the way this essay was written. Both positive and negative sides to the war were shown with many back up statements provided.
    • 23/05/2004
    • 22:02:59
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.