u had good information, however it did not flow well. in some parts i found myself reading the line twice to grasp the meaning. i also think if u would have given more background information on the two situations the contrast of ur anorexic experience vs. ur obese experience would have been more effective...however ur description as the fat courtesan was excellent! it was very vivid...i could see and feel the discrimination..anyway u go girl! u know big girls heat in the winter and shade in the summer!
- 10/05/2002
- 23:10:51
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