Your essay is very detailed and informative. I would say it is one of the best that I have had the pleasure to read. Excellently cited. Thank you!
- 10/01/2007
- 05:52:26
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
When writting essays, when you share information with the reader that is not common knowledge, you should always include references and citations. The title of your essay does not tell the reader what the paper is about. It is pretty ambigious.
- 05/01/2007
- 06:29:11
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
You particularly cite people in your essay, but offer the reader no references. This paper smacks to me as more of an opinion then anything else. When you cite someone in your essasy as saying 'such and such' you should always included references.
- 05/01/2007
- 06:26:31
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Seems to be more of a personal opinion they as of having any real substances with citations/referecnes to back up their opinion. As for me, I have never seen the movie, nor have I ever read the book. Essays of this nature should make the reader want to see the movie or read the book. I will say that I was well written.
- 05/01/2007
- 06:22:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
The essay for a 9th grader is fairly decent. Citing the source of this essay would have been great. The content was excellent.
- 05/01/2007
- 06:19:15
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I am not understanding why you would post a poem. This is an essay site. All I can say is that it was an interesting poem, but irrlelvant.
- 05/01/2007
- 06:14:18
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
You made some good observations when dealing with your son.
- 15/04/2006
- 18:28:51
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
There are many people who have not read this book. You should cite where the information came from. You have some specific determinations that are not common knowledge.
- 15/04/2006
- 16:02:15
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
IT's a decent paper but needs research to support the autors opinions.
- 15/04/2006
- 15:57:17
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Good information, but its based on the writers opinons. There should be some data to back up their points of view.
- 15/04/2006
- 15:54:30
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is way too short. It has not substance. There are no citations to back up their opinions. Made claims, but did not provide data to substanciate their claims.
- 15/04/2006
- 07:52:27
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is more personal than based on fact.
- 15/04/2006
- 07:44:17
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
The contents of this paper is well thought out, but lacks substance. The paragraps run on excessively.
- 15/04/2006
- 07:36:06
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
It was somewhat an okay researched paper. You need to avoid running on the paragraphs. Otherwise it was okay.
- 15/04/2006
- 07:22:56
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very well written and researched. I apperciate when people take the time to research and evaluate their topics properly.
- 15/04/2006
- 07:03:57
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
The author made some good points in this essay. He was lacking some detail, but did give a good accounting of the history of the accounting profession.I would say well Done!
- 29/05/2004
- 00:50:07
- Score: 13 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
This is a very well written essay. You gave me some ideas as to who Bill Gates really is. You also posted the references to the sites where you obtained this information. Well done~
- 29/05/2004
- 00:31:15
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.